I discovered the crows feet
nestled by my eyes.
I forgave them and accepted
them to be mine.
I love that they exhibit
a piece of my struggle.
Days I squinted in delight,
dark nights when weeping
left me drained and numb.
I questioned the veins in my hands,
pronounced and deep,
then I accepted them
for all the hard labor they had done.
Hands weathered by love given,
days from dawn to dusk,
babies they had washed,
foreheads caressed.
I watched my white strands
residing in my dark hair.
I accepted them for their resilience
and beauty.
I challenged my mind to battle the known
and seek the wonder of the unknown.
I challenged my soul to rise up
and embrace the woman
I have become
and love the life I have been given.
Ah, I like this look at 'aging.' I do think there are parts which are not easy to like....but in the end it is best to 'embrace the woman' one has become!
ReplyDeleteAmen!
DeleteI absolutely love this poem as it is a prayer of a woman aging with love and beauty....the end is a mantra for us to take to heart and feel in our souls.
ReplyDelete'I challenged my soul to rise up
and embrace the woman
I have become
and love the life I have been given.'
Thank you!
DeleteWhat a gorgeous poem of self-acceptance - that comes with years of living, loving and giving. Lovely, Ayala.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sherry. Xox
DeleteA lovely piece - strong - impactful - liberating. I love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Wendy.
DeleteA marvelous declaration. This poem reads like a flower in bloom.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThat acceptance is beautiful...
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThere's much richness and bliss in acceptance. Beautifully captivated Ayala.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sumana.
DeleteA wonderful celebration of womanhood
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jae.
DeleteThis is both a grateful and graceful acceptance of the aging process. Beautifully written,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Aging sure comes to us all, must embrace it, even if we don't like some parts, and keep on keeping on indeed.
ReplyDeleteSmiles....
DeleteA beautiful write....you have caputred it perfectly, the aging of the woman.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Annell.
DeleteYour four opening lines speak a lot to me, as do the rest. There is validity in the aging process.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kerry.
Delete...and I hope you rose to the challenge, loving yourself, seasoned by the chapters of life.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bev.
DeletePerhaps the most beautiful thing I have read today
ReplyDeleteYou are kind. Thank you!
DeleteI love how these thing society have taught us to scorn become talismans for a live happily and fully lived.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Deletelove to read your poetry..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteIt is a wonderful meditation to marvel at all the tasks a pair of good hands accomplishes.
ReplyDeleteAgreed.
DeleteA beautiful and loving write Ayala, full of compassion for your ageing self. Lines, silver hair and wisdom make for wonderful friends on our journey ��
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeletePerhaps it is the "life you have created?" Life does seem to be the "sum" of all of our choices? I liked your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Annell. I thought of that as well but I am humbled by the grace of the universe.
DeleteNice ending affirmation and acceptance of the changes in one's body.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis is so blessed, Ayala. I believe my wrinkles and scars speak of who I am, what I have gone through--as you so wonderfully write. I would never go for plastic surgery--I have had too many non-elective surgeries and feel like it would be tempting God, so to speak. Just grateful to be how I am--alive and enjoying life.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Victoria. I am filled with gratitude as well.
DeleteWhat a beautiful tribute to womanhood. I love the metaphor of graying strands and resilience. So true. xo
ReplyDeleteThank you! xo
DeleteWonderful!!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteBeautiful and wise. Love this. :-)
ReplyDelete~Imelda
Thank you, Imelda.
DeleteAmen to this sister.It is WHO you are.
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU!
DeleteLife does require a strong dose of philosophic understanding. This is well conceived and well executed.
ReplyDeleteSteve K.
Thank you, Steve!
DeleteI love the tender sweetness of acceptance in this, Ayala.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gayle!
DeleteThis is awesome. It should be published!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jen. I appreciate it.
DeleteA beautifully rendered piece - imbued with love and wisdom.
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