You entered the door to my heart
and you stepped in.
I let you
I let you
into my mind
in the landscape saturated
of all that I am.
You tasted the essence
of the turmoil,
you savored
my struggle
dangling at your feet.
dangling at your feet.
You did not run,
you did not turn away,
instead you stood like
a sunflower reaching for the sun.
I love the images your words bring to mind and heart especially....
ReplyDelete'in the landscape saturated
of all that I am.'
That is a beautiful and trusting love....
Thank you, Donna.
DeleteOne can be thankful for someone like that!
ReplyDeleteYes :)
DeleteLove the devotion of a sunflower.
ReplyDeleteSmiles....
DeleteIt's so wonderful to know such love. You used just the right words and images to describe it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Myrna.
DeleteReach Baby!!!
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteLove makes us very brave.
ReplyDeleteYES!
DeleteSo beautiful, when one stands strong, "like a sunflower reaching for the sun." A gift.
ReplyDeleteIt's the best gift one can give.
DeleteBeautiful! There was something beyond words to this moment.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful message, wonderfully rendered. (A short memory helps, too ~ smiles ~)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Deletea sunflower waiting for the sun..like that!
ReplyDeleteSmiles
DeleteHow fortunate you are in having that staunch sunflower support.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is a beautiful dedication to the sunflower person bringing light to the narrator.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sumana.
DeleteA stunning poem
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jae.
Deleteinstead you stood like
ReplyDeletea sunflower reaching for the sun.
So nice to be accorded such assurances. Lovingly steadfast for the occasion ayala!
Hank
Thank you, Hank.
DeleteThere is a very strong feeling of commitment in these lines.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Kerry.
DeleteLove offers courage! Beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSunflowers are strong, growing by the roadside, reaching for the sun!
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteWhat a beautiful love poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSunflowers are one of my faves. Love the imagery in these words, Ayala. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rudri.
DeleteSo lovely. There is nothing like baby goodness.
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