If I forget you,
let death carry me on her shoulders.
If I forget you
the walls of my heart
would be empty,
the sounds of my soul
would be silent.
If I forget you
there is no reason to live,
you are the heartbeat,
you are the flame of my soul.
that is how love should feel... non-replacable...
ReplyDeletewow!!! Now this is love and very deep. :)
ReplyDeleteOooo La-la !!!
ReplyDeletesmiles...without them what else matters...
ReplyDeleteand hopefully we dont forget to tell them we love them...
Make life worth living in every way
ReplyDeleteThose secret torches that we carry can be powerful things. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteThis is as good as love can get! Nice.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely... you made your love palpable (it's hard to keep such a beautiful secret) xo
ReplyDeleteSo much imagery and emotion packed in so few words. Well done, Ayala.
ReplyDeleteLove cannot go deeper than this.
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem of an enduring love.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, ayala.
Memories are never appreciated like those of gone before.. and the treasure of that love.. can never be less than what is felt for now.. as same as love..:)
ReplyDeleteWhat a love! and it should be like this only.
ReplyDeleteOh my. Such a deep affection and love.
ReplyDeleteThere's a beautiful promise embedded in this poem. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteYou took me very deep with that one Ayala - wonderfully done.
ReplyDeletesuch passion here
ReplyDeleteA very deep sense of love here Ayala!
ReplyDeleteA lovely proclamation of love, Ayala!
ReplyDeletewe never forget, but it's ok to love once again when we are ready
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed, Ayala. I'm reading a book called "unbroken" about a man who was a POW in WWII, and this poem makes me think of his family's faith and love for him.
ReplyDeleteThere is beauty in this. But I hope that love lost would not take away all your reason to live.
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