Her rivers pulsate in the veins of my mind,
her desert's wilderness on my skin.
Her land a piece of my narrative,
she thunders in the echoes of my thoughts,
in the geography of my being.
The soundtrack of childhood,
hopscotched into the present.
My roots tangled
with blurred lines
of self,
of quest,
of devotion.
Recently I went back to my birthplace of Israel. I was delighted and whole to be there,
to bathe in her beauty and to be with family that I love.
Memories brought back to the forefront. Home sure can do that.
ReplyDeleteYes, it did.
DeleteDear Ayala:
ReplyDelete"My roots tangled
with blurred lines
of self," Great lines...
Thanks for a terrific short but power packed read... With Best Wishes Scott
Thank you, Scott.
DeleteIt never leaves you, ever ~ Good to see you Ayala ~
ReplyDeleteThank you, Grace. Xx
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Thank you!
DeleteI love the first two lines.
ReplyDeleteI cannot even understand how it would feel to part with your country. I think it would cleave my heart.
ReplyDeleteIt does....
DeleteYour homeland speaks through your words beautifully. I love the verb choices..."pulsate", "thunders", "hopscotched". This is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you kindly.
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ReplyDeleteYou brought your memories for us to feel
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteHome is where the heart is huh?
ReplyDeleteMy heart is thorn with my home and my birth place :) I love them both.
DeletePoignant piece, Ayala. This is so beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Maria.
DeleteBeautifully expressed ❤️
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful and I can feel your deep love for the land and home of your birth. It is forever embedded in your heart and soul.
ReplyDeleteYes! Thank you.
DeleteLovely, Ayala. Especially adore "the geography of my being." I also like the imagery of "hopscotching into the present."
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rudri. Xo
DeleteHow gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Delete"Especially love the finish here:
ReplyDeleteroots tangled
with blurred lines
of self,
of quest,
of devotion."
Great!
Thank you, Scott.
DeleteIncredible write!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteLovely, Ayala. Indeed there is something said for visiting the place of one's roots! Blurred lines, but lines nonetheless. Beautiful thoughts.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mary.
DeleteHow wonderful to visit your homeland, part of the geography of your being, for sure.
ReplyDeleteYes...pretty amazing ....
DeleteWonderful. Our places are a part of us, aren't they?
ReplyDeleteP.S I would love to visit Israel someday!
It is a gorgeous place and you should go!
DeleteThis is lovely. And the form - like a chalice - is ... wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Wendy.
Deleteit seems that we too often forget the power of place ~
ReplyDeleteUntil we are there....
Deletethere's something special in going home - sounds like you had a great time - i will travel to israel in november - looking forward to it
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