The seed sprouts into a plant,
dawn turns into a new day,
the infant grows,
and so did our love.
I did not ask you
for eternity,
I did not seek,
question,
judge,
I did not rush your love.
I took it one day at a time,
one stolen kiss,
one moment of desire,
drops of magic in the sands of time.
In the stillness of dawn
our love is sacred.
You reach for me,
our tangled feet meet,
the silence cradles us in the moment.
There are no interruptions,
or decisions to make,
or small stuff to sweat,
or words we may utter and regret.
In the stillness of dawn,
love is reborn,
like the new day.
All that was said is forgotten
and forgiven
in the stillness of dawn
we remember
how we became one.
Dedicated to my husband, he is my love and my best friend. Happy Valentine's Day to all of you. Meet us here http://dversepoets.com/ where we share our thoughts and our hearts.
we remember
how we became one.
Dedicated to my husband, he is my love and my best friend. Happy Valentine's Day to all of you. Meet us here http://dversepoets.com/ where we share our thoughts and our hearts.
That's a lovely dedication, joy is all around us we just need to be aware of it's power to sustain us.
ReplyDeleteTangled feet can sure be fun haha
ReplyDeletesmiles. it is a beautiful thing you share
ReplyDeletelove unrushed is allowed to deepen and grow
into something that lasts
I have been ushered to that still, quiet, precious place by your words! Lovely!
ReplyDeletebeautiful... taking love one day at a time...i think that's the perfect recipe for a wonderful relationship
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and blessed love ~ Take it one day at a time, reborn & new ~
ReplyDeleteHappy Hearts Day to you & hubby ~
wonderful love poem.. I love how you describe it growing.. that's how it should be...
ReplyDeleteYou can't beat that kind of love. Lovely words.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love the way you detailed all of those things that we can all relate to, and forgiveness each new day is integral to the oneness.
ReplyDeleteAs a poem, this is clear and effective - just enough detail - thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteIn the stillness of dawn , love is reborn. Just a beautiful piece. LOvely.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem, Ayala. It is wonderful that the love of your life is also your best friend. You have a beautiful relationship indeed!
ReplyDeleteGood evening Ayala - so glad I made it here tonight - your best poem so far, I think and my favourite of the night - truly beautiful and inspired work - crammed full of beautiful lines that made me a bit weepy to be honest. How lucky anyone is to have loved like this... With Best Wishes Scott
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the use of the word one... it gave strength to the poem
ReplyDeletedrops of magic in the sands of time..a very lovely poem..
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely poem, Ayala! I like the subtle glimpse you give us into your relationship. Did your husband read it?
ReplyDeletehow wonderful it is when you meet true love
ReplyDeleteA great capture of the holiday!
ReplyDeleteNice to have a good, loving husband. We have that in common. Happy Valentines Day to you.
ReplyDeleteThe serenity of stillness in love. There is nothing like it. Beautiful tribute to your relationship with your husband, Ayala.
ReplyDelete"In the stillness of dawn,
ReplyDeletelove is reborn,
like the new day.
All that was said is forgotten
and forgiven"… beautiful dear Ayala, so beautiful.
You certainly know how to love, Ayala! Beautiful :) xo ~jackie~
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful piece of written art, Ayala. What a wonderful gift to your love. Forgiveness is one of the keys to an enduring relationship, as I understand it.
ReplyDeleteI love how well you articulate the moment when nothing needs to be said at all and how powerfully healing it can be.
ReplyDeleteA lovely poetic piece that I enjoyed reading. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
Happy Valentine's Day to you too!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Your husband must be so proud. :-)
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
This is a very beautiful love poem ... awesome :-)
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