Hold on to me,
I will shield you from the rain.
I will listen to your laughter carried
by the wind,
across the bay,
across the water.
Hold my hand,
I will shelter you
from the wind,
we will breathe in the evergreen,
it will be like Christmas morning ,
when your eyes are wide,
filled with sparkle,
wonderful. i feel the sheltering love here...ReplyDelete
It will be like Christmas morning. Love that line! Six words never said so much.ReplyDelete
I agree with StaciaReplyDelete
oh i love the christmas morning reference with the eyes wide with sparkling and wonderReplyDelete
Thank you, Leslie :)ReplyDelete
Thank you, Stacia :)ReplyDelete
Thank you, Hope.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Claudia :) Christmas morning is magical !ReplyDelete
nice piece Ayala. And thank ye for stopping by WordSalad.ReplyDelete
Always a pleasure both ways
Thank you, Luke.ReplyDelete
This is romantic. And what can beat Christmas morning?!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Alita.ReplyDelete
I love the Christmas morning line - the wonder and love it sparks is beyond comforting and inspiring.ReplyDelete
I think that sparkle says it all. That's what I remember the most when I think of my fondest memories. It's the sparkle you can see and feel.ReplyDelete
I agree, Justine. Christmas morning is magical....ReplyDelete
Rudri, the sparkle is everything. It's the love and joy and comfort :)ReplyDelete
your words shine.ReplyDelete
keep it up.
check out short story slam today. hope to see your participation.