Finding the will to live; chained yet still inspired by life and nature. Very nicely done!
love the taste of air brushing on lips and living on even if things are tight...good write ayala
nice poem tho the picture freaks me out ...thanks for the words
How close freedom can be, and how I let myself be chained. Grateful for every wind, whisper or poem (!) that sparks the desire to live more fully and freely!
sigh, i hope you find it...it can be as fleeting as a breeze...and anticipating those ups and downs helps me find it...
We all find ourselves. No other way...skyscrappers
Beautifully shared of the battle to find oneself, longing to go beyond the obvious.
It's like swimming up from the deep, trying to break to the surface. Good poem.
The wind does seduce us into wide open spaces... calls us to see things a bit more clearly out there. Heartfelt poem, thank you.
This is so good. I found myself needing to take a deep breath as I read it. Guess you could say you drew the reader in!
Literally breathtaking poem and photo! Great job!
In to the air he may go - nice use of the image
expanding and contracts ~ rode on the breath ~ayala ~ ~ loved it ~ Lib @Libithinahad to sign as anony ~ sorry ayala ~ but as you can see I'm not ~ Lib
Thank you, Adam :)
Thank you, Claudia. It's not always easy....
Thank you, Kez.Don't freak out :)
Adrienne...gratitude always should whisper in our ear.
Brian...sigh...it can't always be sunshine, can it?
Gautami, we do....
Thank you, Petrina .
Thank you, Glynn. I like the way you put it....
Victoria, I felt like I couldn't breathe when I wrote it. I remembered a painful memory....thank you.
Thank you, Lolamouse :)
Thank you, John.
Thank you, Lib.I don't know what's going on but I had trouble earlier leaving a comment as well. :)
How fleeting the moments of life & thought!Thanks for joining my blog :)Aloha from HonoluluComfort Spiral><}}(°> ><}}(°>
Finding our true selves is so important then you can be happily alone with yourself.
Cloudia, they are fleeting....and it's my pleasure.
KB, it's true....
even when it seems impossible and restricted it is possible to have the will.
That picture is something else. I really liked the idea of the wind seducing one to live. That was a great idea :)
Really drew me in. I've known the feeling of struggling to keep a positive will against huge odds.
What a perspective, ayala, in both shot and beautiful poem. Wow!
wow ... positive, hopeful ... loved it.
Thank you for sharing delightful romantic poem.
Christine...must find the will.
Thank you, Lori.
Thank you, Eileen.
Thank you, Helena.
Thank you, Talon. Scott Wyden's photograph. As soon as I saw it,it all came to me. :)
Thank you, Baishali.
Thank you, Sean.
I love that image you chose, and I LOVE that poem! It's almost as if you wrote it about me. It caught me in the gut. Very nice work!!
Thank you, Caroline. The image spoke to me ....
Love the photograph Ayala. And I like the sense of in-between that is conveyed by your words. Well done.
Thank you, Rudri. :)