Sun Kissed Days

Sun Kissed Days

Tuesday, January 29, 2013

My Beloved




You traced a heart
on the shower door,
a love letter to me.
The water fell 
like the rain did on the roof
of our summer refuge.
I traced my fingers on your skin,
words of love,
poetry I long to give you.
Your wings carry me,
your branches embrace me.
You are my ocean,
you are my home.
Your passion fierce as the wind,
your love tender.
I love your imperfections.
I love the fire in your eyes.
I love your mischief,
always a boy,
yet a strong man.
Five A.M,
we inhale coffee,
our feet tangled together.
Waiting for our day to begin,
a new page to fill. 



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96 comments:

  1. passion fierce as the wind and love tender....i like the intimacy and playfulness in this...the thought in leaving those love notes on the shower door...and its great to start that day together as well...lovely ayala

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    1. Thank you, Brian. it is definitely a great way to start the day :)

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  2. nice..a heart on the shower door..so lovely...beautiful intimacy and warmth in this ayala..

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    1. Thank you, Claudia. I love the little love letters on the shower door ;)

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  3. Very intimate indeed, today at your feed.

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  4. Now THIS is "sharing your thoughts" Ayala! Keep having them...keep sharing them. Well done!

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  5. What a beautiful love poem. Last week you shared a wonderful poem about your son...and this week this one. I love to read your joy.

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  6. There have been days like that, thus I do not give up on the reality of mutual love. Beautiful feeling from this.

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    1. Thank you, Yousei. Never give up on love. :)

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  7. The description of lover and sea are intermingled in my mind - the passion (of lover and the sea), the tenderness and intensity (of lover and the sea) are one and the same - I love what you've done here !!

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  8. so beautiful dear Ayala... I know this feeling, it is the same for my and my husband.

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  9. when we love someone so much, we really have to appreciate it because we don't know when it's going to end.

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  10. Enjoyed the intimacy and the playfulness - particularly glad to see passion and love described as opposite sides of the same coin, one fierce, the other gentle.

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  11. so sweet... loved the heart on the shower door

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    1. Thank you, Pat :) I loved it too ;)

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  12. I like the sweet intimacy ~ May it always fill your hearts ~

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  13. Wonderful...what a strong, loving relationship...always love to hear about those!

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  14. What an incredible write--I was smiling the whole time--water fell like the rain on the roof--wonderful

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  15. I love the imagery in the opening lines. Who hasn't carved out a heart on the shower door?

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  16. Beautiful! I really like this one, Ayala! Awesome write!

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  17. Beautiful write Ayala, loved the heart on the shower door...so romantic... you're a very lucky lady...and he's a very lucky man :)

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  18. Lovely :)
    (and totally unrelated, when I saw the title I had to smile, as everything right now is Paige's "beloved"... from cheerios to cups of water...)

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    1. Thank you, Corinne. I love that Paige is all about "beloved" :)

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  19. I love the heart drawn on the steamy shower door and the image of the tangled feet is so sweet. A perfect start to the day...

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  20. Aw, this is beautiful. So very romantic. I love it!!

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  21. Love the way you share this,... so beautiful. = )

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  22. Ah, A...you are always so filled with love...it's a pleasure and an inspiration to read your lovely words...this is no exception. Thank you for sharing :)) xo

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  23. Heartfelt. The closing is my favorite. Inhaling coffee and feet tangled...What a beautiful life.

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  24. WHAT IMPERFECTIONS !!!!!!!!!!!

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  25. a lovely, loving poem. It really is all about love. : )

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  26. Oh! Just lovely...the essence of love!

    Lady Nyo

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  27. Tender and extremely moving. Loved it!

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  28. Such a beautiful tribute to everyday love, which in my opinion is the very best kind. Just lovely!

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    1. Thank you, Kelly. And yes...it is the best kind of love.

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  29. Very touching piece. It exudes love and warmth. Love it. :)

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  30. beautiful & tender, Ayala. loved the first three lines especially... so intimate and touching.

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  31. Ayala, you always write with such a soft and delicate touch. Very nice read for me after a long day, thanks.

    Pamela

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    1. Thank you, Pamela. Happy you enjoyed it.

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  32. Love without words, only touch. Beautiful

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  33. I have to say, the picture that you chose to accompany this post was perfect. So beautifully and vividly written.

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    1. Thank you, Keith. I love that picture. I took it out in the ocean on a beautiful day.

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  34. Ayala what a completely lovely look at your love affair. :)

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  35. "our feet tangled together" - those four words sum up a beautiful relationship perfectly, ayala.

    Happy New Year! It's wonderful to be back and reading your beautiful writing again!

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    1. It is so good to see you again, I have missed you. I hope you are doing better. xoxo

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  36. Wow, that was certainly piquant! :-) Spicier than usual. Great stuff. Thanks.

    Greetings from London.

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  37. Just lovely and passionate; love it ;))

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  38. Wow...love is brimming...cant be a better start of the day ...How precious these lovely n passionate moments are, only a person in love can understand ....loved it :)

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    1. Thank you, Sadia. :) I appreciate it.

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  39. A beautiful poem, highlights the importance of the union, highlights everyday love of little things. Compliments.

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  40. I hope he read this one?!!

    Just beautiful and powerfully passionate, Dear Ayala. And 5:00 a.m. is an early start, hopefully you get to bed nice and early!

    I probably should be sleeping, but some wonderful poems tonight are my guilty pleasure before turning in, as I worked so hard all day today cleaning my house, packaging eBay sales, cooking, organizing and such. Sunday is my only day to sleep in, so when I wake refreshed, I'm raring to get stuff done.

    Anyway... this has nothing to do with your loving poem, but I'm in a chatty mood I guess. :)

    Poems by my favorite poet friends are a nice night cap, thanks for an uplift in this one.

    xoxo

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    1. He did ;). Thank you, Jannie. Sounds like your hands are full so I am glad you had a chance to visit and a chance to soak in some poetry. xoxo

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  41. Very nice poem! Love the pic too! Thanks for visiting my blog. Have a great week!!

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    1. Thank you, and I wish you the same :)

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