Sun Kissed Days
Tuesday, October 11, 2011
The Salvation That Is Yoga
The dark room is
filled with light,
filled with energy,
moving through the room.
The fly on the wall,
watches us as we move in unison.
As we reach an inner peace,
filled with gratitude to the universe.
Our instructor spreading seeds of knowledge,
words of letting go,
words of connections to one another.
Letting the ego dance outside our bodies.
The knowledge that we are perfect as we are,
the love of acceptance.
She scatters the seeds,
and we collect them,
our spirit blooms,
a ray of sunshine follows us home.
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Oh, this makes me really want to go to yoga tonight!
ReplyDeletevery calming piece. I too love yoga for it is what you describe! thank you!
ReplyDeletenice...my wife has a vid...i think it would be cool to do a class and all do it together...calm feel to this for sure...
ReplyDeleteShe scatters the seeds,
ReplyDeleteand we collect them,
our spirit blooms,
a ray of sunshine follows us home.
and thatknowledge that we are perfect
love filled lines, Ayala
love this!
The calmness induced by yoga and your poem gelling nicely. Love it.
ReplyDeletelove the scattering and collecting of seeds and the sunray following home...a colleague at work started just recently to take yoga classes and she's always telling a bit about it..nice
ReplyDeleteso much beauty here Ayala..."She scatters the seeds,
ReplyDeleteand we collect them,
our spirit blooms," yes, yes, yes.
The fly and the imagined buzz really grounds this for me.
ReplyDeleteCalmly set the mood, never tried but would be interesting to give a go at least once, maybe.
ReplyDeleteI like the scattering of the seeds and bringing a bit of a sunshine home.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind words in my blog.. I needed it.
A peaceful place I strive for... to be content and happy with things as they are. I love this!
ReplyDeleteJuliana...I hope you went :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hope. :)
ReplyDeleteBrian...take a class..it's great...I tried it first with a video and it just wasn't the same. The class is amazing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dulce. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Adura. :)
ReplyDeleteClaudia...I know that you would love it..it brings such peace. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Laura. :) Hope you are well. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Colleen. :)
ReplyDeleteYou should, Pat. :) at least once....
ReplyDeleteThank you, Heaven. My thoughts are with you and your parents.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Laurie. :)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful ayala! I have loved the idea of yoga...and have tried it twice. Didn't quite experince the peace....was too busy trying to keep up with poses. But I'm not giving up...your lovely poem inspired me to try again!
ReplyDeleteI practice yoga almost daily, it and your write are wonderful :)
ReplyDeleteLetting the ego dance outside your body!!! Great line. I love this.
ReplyDeleteLovely, uplifting poem, ayala.
ReplyDeleteNow I see why your life is sun-kissed, Ayala. Beautiful,and the sense of peace truly comes across.
ReplyDeleteYou describe yoga precisely and beautifully.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds so lovely... every year I say I'm going to try it, and still have yet to make it happen. This really drew me in and made me feel that way again.
ReplyDelete"letting go the ego..." That's the hardest part I bet. You make it sound so appealing. Maybe....
ReplyDeleteThe picture this paints is like watching the spirit of a haiku. Well done, Ayala.
ReplyDeletedo like the shattering of the seeds... I guess we can all to the to a point in any given day
ReplyDeleteThe beauty of yoga is that it a physical and spiritual thing. Thanks for sharing, ayala!
ReplyDeleteHank
i like the idea of the fly on the wall watching you all :)
ReplyDeleteahhh.... this makes me miss my own yoga practice. It's been too long! There is such beautiful tranquility to this piece. :) Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write!
ReplyDeleteI have to tell you, though, that it gave me quite a giggle. When I first saw the title, I read it as "The Salvation That Is Yoda."
This is a wonderful string of words, recollecting a beautiful experience. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteoh, this is lovely! I especially like the idea of the ego dancing out of the body.
ReplyDeleteYOU are the wisest poet I know!!
ReplyDeleteWe ARE perfect for just being.
Who ARE you, anyway?? :) :)
And that rooftop is really really nice. in Paris, I think?
xoxo
A nice meditative piece. Let our egos dance but on the outside, never letting it grip us and become our reason for joy. :) Thanks for your poem.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful feeling that must be! Very spiritual I think....
ReplyDeleteKristi, I am so happy that you are inspired to try it again. It's hard in the beginning but so amazing. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, David. That's awesome! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Victoria. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ann :)
ReplyDeleteAww Joy...a sun kissed life :) a sweet comment :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Oceangirl :)
ReplyDeleteMrs. Mediocrity, I hope you try it :) let me know!
ReplyDeleteSteve...maybe is a start....
ReplyDeleteThank you, Glynn. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Wolfsrosebud. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hank :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Leslie :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Joanna :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mama Zen. You made me laugh...that's cute :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Denise. Nice to see you here again.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sheila :)
ReplyDeleteJannie,
ReplyDeleteyou are so sweet. :)
I appreciate your support always.
xoxo
The rooftop is actually in Chicago :)
Thank you, Ravenblack. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, John. It is a wonderful feeling and I am so happy that I pursued yoga.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful write about different energies moving through a group experience to produce a wonderful outcome. Beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Elizabeth. Glad you liked it :)
ReplyDelete"The dark room is filled with light" ...love that! I felt like I was actually there as I read this.
ReplyDeleteyou've captured the spirit of the kula perfectly...your words just breathe. you've inspired me, ayala, I've never thought of writing a poem about the yoga experience...I shall do one soon, many thanks, namaste ~
ReplyDeleteLove the fly on the wall watching...a lovely peace-giving write!
ReplyDeleteIt's all about letting the ego go, I realise that more and more as I get older.. dig this write, Ayala
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem!
ReplyDeletestolen moments
Thank you, CM. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Libraryscene :) I am looking forward to reading it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, 1emeraldcity :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Luke. How true...the older we get the more we get this. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gautami. :)
ReplyDeleteI've only tried certain poses on my own, but maybe I should try a class sometime. Sometimes during stressful times, I have a horrible time unwinding. Thanks for another peaceful write :)
ReplyDeletecalm and beautiful ...
ReplyDeleteI've tried Yoga a few times but i usually end up giggling and falling over. Beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteLori, a class makes all the difference :) it will help you with the stress.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Baishali.
ReplyDeleteThank you, KB. :) Giggling is good :)
ReplyDeleteOptimism isn't my readiest response, but you've managed to make it a seductive option in this heartening poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, James.
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