A profound, sad poem. Thanks for sharing it.
Deeply felt, deeply tragic poem. It is perfect for anyone that knows loss, and longing--perhaps a mother to her child, or one lover to another...the bodies, they fade, but their voices remain, even in death. Powerful piece.
being apart...ugh...yet being right there...the rocking of the waves is a very nice touch as i can see the narrator rocking as they thing about it...
A very felt poem here...my son is in the Navy...soomewhere by Somalia, chasing pirates. He was a pain in the neck before he left, for the previous two years....but a mother still loves regardless.Lady Nyo
Oh we love so much and a boy is something special indeed...to swaddle them and rock to sleep a blessed memory....the sadness taken to heart here...blessings...bkm
The separation and longing is intense, yet there's that beauty in connection that remains.
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awesome!!!!There's a dreamy feel to your words.. complimenting image..I love your Blog site- Doggie Pie is so handsome.. (right?)Hugs xxx
I like the idea that, no matter where we are, we can all see the sky speckled with stars. It's such a unifying image amid separation and distance.
Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing your thoughts! In BTW, you have very inspiring and well written posts! Keep up the great work, and positives vibes.Cheers! (^.^)
Thank you, Matt.
Thank you, Chris.
Thank you, Brian. Yes, the longing......
Lady Nyo, I wish your son a safe return.
Thank you, BKM.
Kelly, there is always a longing when we really love.....:)
Thank you, Cynthia.
Thanks, Olivia. Glad you like it.xxx
Thank you, Olivia.xx
Stacia, i love that too. No matter where we are we know..............
What a beautiful expression of love....regardless of circumstance.
Thank you, Mighty M.
Rhonya, thank you. What a nice thing to say, I appreciate it :)
Short n' very sweet.Luke
So good to see you joining OSW!
Thank you, Luke.
Thank you, Belinda :)