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Sunday, May 6, 2018

Roar


As long as I have truth,
I'll walk in your shadow
with my palms open.
I will feed your soul
with raw seeds
and crumbled dreams 
of my bruised ego.
I will flood the chambers of
your heart
with light.
Learning will happen in spaces
of defeat and rage,
in a fine line of silence and roaring,
tuning the sounds of life and
digesting the
lessons that set us free.

31 comments:

  1. A soulful adoration. Reads like a prayer

    Much🌼love

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  2. I love the walking with palms open, and the learning that is promised along the journey.

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  3. I agree this is a prayer...a song for the soul....and such a strong message of truth....

    'Learning will happen in spaces
    of defeat and rage'

    Loved this!!

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  4. 'As long as I have truth,
    I'll walk in your shadow
    with my palms open.'


    a lovely and indelible line in a wonderful piece.

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  5. I too love this wise and humble piece. But I wonder who is the "you" addressed? Your Self, perhaps?

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    1. Thanks!....I will tell...not just yet

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  6. Whoa! Took my breath away!
    Nice!
    ZQ

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  7. 'I will feed your soul with raw seeds and crumbled dreams of my bruised ego'... this is so poignant.

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  8. as long as I have the truth- that is indeed the bottom line..well said!

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  9. Learning sure happens in such spaces, sometimes more than we think.

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  10. As long as I have truth is a great opening line. I also like digesting of lessons that set us free.

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  11. Powerful thoughts. “...Learning will happen in spaces / of defeat and rage,” So true, so hard to realize.

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  12. very lovely and moving lines in the poem. this sounds like a battle cry? :)

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  13. I love this poem Ayala! It is powerful, wise, and utterly beautiful!

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  14. This is beautiful. I like the themes you are writing to in your poetry lately....very philosophical!

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  15. Truth is the way ahead. Powerful lines.

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