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Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Gone

When I am gone,
 I want to dwell in your dreams
like a fluttering butterfly
on your skin.
Kiss your eyelids as you sleep
and embrace you with my wings.
when I am gone I will dance with you
through all the continents,
we will
 hopscotch through the stars
as we climb into
 each others arms.
When I am gone
I'll leave my scent on your pillow
while the violins play
and you drink poems for breakfast
in a tall cup
knowing you were loved.


28 comments:

  1. I like idea of dancing with the loved one through all the continents ~

    A sweet write Ayala ~

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  2. How beautiful, Ayala...gives me the chills. Many wonderful images to hold on to, but I think I'll go with drinking poems for breakfast from a tall cup. So intimate in a way.

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  3. Kiss your eyelids as you sleep
    and embrace you with my wings.

    Such a sweet & tender write.

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  4. This is the stuff of wistful daydreams

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  5. I like the hopscotching through the stars, Ayala. Such a beautiful, fanciful wish.

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  6. Just beautiful, I love the notion of drinking love poems for breakfast... The love in this poem shines right through... And the sense of a guardian angel is really comforting.

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  7. quite lovely









    ALOHA, Friend
    ComfortSpiral

    (\__/)
    (='.'=)
    (")_('')

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  8. I really like this, Ayala. Love will last long after you are gone!

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  9. Well.. for me at
    least.. the Love
    of my wife
    and i
    will be
    illustrated
    forever or however
    long servers last..
    long after
    we die..
    and if one..
    just one
    person
    smiles..
    all of this will
    be worth it.. and
    if one person comes
    to understand what
    Unconditional Love
    really
    means
    then it
    will
    be
    a miracle..
    i hope for miracles..
    i have faith in miracles
    i believe in the miracle of Love..
    This Love is Real and True..
    I WILL SHOUT IT FROM
    THIS MOUNTAIN
    WITH
    NO
    LIMITS
    OR EXPECTATIONS..:)

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  10. When they passed on, one would miss them but memories linger on! Great lines ayala!

    Hank

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  11. I love the dancing but most of all drinking poems for breakfast

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    1. I have to say.... that I love it too :)

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  12. beautiful soft words. touching every aspect of your loved ones life is a magnificent plan! In every moment of their breathing life I would do just that. I believe they would know it was you Ayala! I have experienced a few times during meditation in a room that was still and void of draft, the soft cool brush of what felt like butterfly wings on my arm. Very gentle and soft like your words you've expressed in this touching poem. Love it! Off to have my cup of poetry now! thank you! take care!

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    1. Thank you dearest Hope. I have felt things that were unexplained as well. I appreciate all your kindness always. Xox
      Enjoy your cup of poetry. :)

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  13. I love this:
    "we will
    hopscotch through the stars"

    And the last six lines.

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  14. This makes my heart feel light. Lovingly sweet writing!

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  15. Beautiful. And that statue is one of my favorites. :)

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  16. Lovely. I love the image of drinking poetry for breakfast. So visceral.

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