Sun Kissed Days
Tuesday, March 27, 2012
The One For Me
with passion in your veins.
A man with a boy's heart,
you delight in hermit crabs,
finding a school of bait.
You cast a net like a matador,
in a bullfight.
Your arms strong,
your lines flowing.
I love the fire in your eyes,
those eyes know me,
the way they know the tides.
Your hands know me,
the way they know a tug of a Marlin or a shark.
When the Marlin dances,
there is wonder in your eyes.
The way your eyes shine
when I wrap myself around you
and melt into you.
you create art and beauty
from the moments of our life.
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Wonderful Ayala! I hope you showed this to him.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Mary. :)Delete
awww...this is beautiful...love the intimacy in it...the knowing of the eyes and hands....and the feelings within them....def hope he got to read this...ReplyDelete
Thank you, Brian. :)Delete
Which such a thing is found, wonderful indeed, very nice.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Pat :)Delete
This is vibrant, alive!! Just the way a full life and a true love are meant to feel!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Adrienne..it is meant to be this way... :)Delete
he knows the tides and can catch the most exotic creatures in your ocean. so very nicely done:)ReplyDelete
Thank you, Ed :)Delete
wonderful tribute... someone is lovedReplyDelete
Thank you...and yes he is :)Delete
Awww... your love is so obvious. It's a wonderful thing to see. Prose is glowing. :)ReplyDelete
Thank you, Bren :)Delete
Your love fills every line--beautifully!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Audrey :)Delete
I love your thoughts and your heart, Ayala!ReplyDelete
Sounds like you got an amazing catch!!
He's a keeper :) Thank you, dear Jannie...Delete
Loved this ayala--full of the heart's truth, and reminded me of Hemingway, for some reason--maybe the marlin. ;_)ReplyDelete
Thank you, Joy. I love Hemingway and I love the ocean and my fisherman..maybe that's why :)Delete
Thank you, KB :)Delete
Aw...this is so sweet and romantic...love it ~ReplyDelete
Thank you, Grace :)Delete
Beautifully spun! A piece from the heart and so emotionally reaching,I enjoyed this a lot! xoxoReplyDelete
Thank you, Poppy :) happy you enjoyed it!Delete
There are many happy women whose men love them--and love to fish! You have found one such...a 'keeper'. And I am sure he knows it. What FEELINGS you translate into words, just beautifully done, Ayala!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Steve...he is a keeper :) Peace.Delete
Ayala- This is so beautiful... a love song, really.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Laurie :)Delete
so sweet and beautiful, that love shines through in these words.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Kelly :)Delete
Clearly true love, thank you for sharing a piece of your gift with us, gorgeous!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Anna :)Delete
what beautiful and heartfelt intimacy...so much warmth and tenderness in this ayala..ReplyDelete
Thank you, Claudia. Hope you are having a blast in N.Y.C :)Delete
The comfort and beauty of those who know us and love us unlike any other...it's a beautiful thing. This is wonderful to read, Ayala.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Emma :)Delete
Beautiful write, I love that he delights in hermit crabs...they're fabulous creatures. An intimate portrait of love.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Di. He has a love for all these creatures...so sweet!Delete
What's obvious here is the love that emanates from every word. Nice Ayala!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Rudri :)Delete
just a beautiful sentiment and emotion carried in this...wonderful pen my friend! ~ RoseReplyDelete
Thank you, Rose :)Delete
O, how I love this poem! The tenderness, the intimacy...turns me into a melted chocolate pool Lovely!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Jackie...how sweet :)Delete
A beautiful poem, full of tenderness and love. I enjoyed this immensely.ReplyDelete
Thank you, James :)Delete
I suddenly want to go fishing! I really like this image: "You cast a net like a matador, in a bullfight." Perfect.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Kristen :) Go fishing...you will love it!Delete
This is really lovely!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Mama Zen :)Delete
Wow, Ayala, this piece is very sensuous!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Caroline :)Delete
Very direct and intimate. Nicely done.
Thank you, Steve. I appreciate it. :)Delete
Thank you, Sucen :)Delete
Wonderful, ayala! It takes strong arms to land a marlin.So also strong feelings of deep love! Great write!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Hank...love those arms :)Delete
Love is never fishy...ouchReplyDelete
Love is good :)Delete
Beautiful and full of love! Lovely write Ayala! ♥ReplyDelete
Thank you, Bradley <3Delete
what a love poem! the last lines sum it up perfectly - you create art and beautyReplyDelete
from the moments of our life
Thank you, Sheila. :)Delete
What a beautiful poem to your love. I especially like these lines:ReplyDelete
"You cast a net like a matador,
in a bullfight."
Nice simile! (And thanks for your encouraging words on my dolphin poem - I wasn't quite happy with it and changed a few things after you read it. Now I like it better :)
Thank you, Leslie. I loved your poem :)Delete
You always make me cry Ayala :) This is beautiful, you own the dream.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Oceangirl :) You are sweet.Delete
i agree with oceangirl... this is so sweet it made me tear up. :)ReplyDelete
Thank you, Joanna :)Delete
i've never seen a Marlin danceReplyDelete
Good ink, Ayala. How about a stanza break or two? (just a suggestion :)ReplyDelete
Thank you, Luke :)Delete
Love the intimacy in this. And what man wouldn't want to be compared to a matador!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Belinda :) He is that and more :)Delete
Beautiful! Strong, virulent, powerful. Love the pictures these words evoke!ReplyDelete
just thought i'd stop by and wish you a nice sunday...i'm back home again...was a wonderful time...ReplyDelete
Such a great piece...you've really managed to capture just about everything that's important in a man!ReplyDelete
I hope you are having a fantastic weekend so far!
always a great start to my day. A very manly man described here.ReplyDelete
Those last two lines, ayala, just sum up what makes for a beautiful life. Just gorgeous!ReplyDelete