tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post3554835628256302871..comments2023-12-05T20:23:46.899-05:00Comments on a sun kissed life: Halfwayayalahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-33537532918931401082015-08-25T11:52:05.206-04:002015-08-25T11:52:05.206-04:00Oh goodness this hurts. :( -PatriciaOh goodness this hurts. :( -PatriciaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-65618509078159214542015-08-24T20:04:40.805-04:002015-08-24T20:04:40.805-04:00The melancholy is palpable in your words. xoThe melancholy is palpable in your words. xoRudrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02892114592005195420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-6013170243929265192015-08-23T03:39:23.855-04:002015-08-23T03:39:23.855-04:00yes ~yes ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-19006474200389686702015-08-22T21:16:04.209-04:002015-08-22T21:16:04.209-04:00Good heavens, this is painful to read. I love the ...Good heavens, this is painful to read. I love the last two lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-75184895336022751712015-08-22T13:57:24.716-04:002015-08-22T13:57:24.716-04:00These lines: "Smooth verses
are stored away l...These lines: "Smooth verses<br />are stored away like<br />ornaments after Christmas.<br />Silence gnaws like<br />acid on metal,"<br /><br />WOW! You paint such effective word pictures with these lines! Excellent.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-86351594106588827662015-08-22T13:10:30.380-04:002015-08-22T13:10:30.380-04:00The lines that got me are "smooth verses stor...The lines that got me are "smooth verses stored away like ornaments after Christmas". I wonder about my writing, after I am gone.......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-15612797182856852162015-08-21T19:03:31.157-04:002015-08-21T19:03:31.157-04:00Old towns on small highways..
Business goes..
with...Old towns on small highways..<br />Business goes..<br />withering away..<br />people staying<br />separating<br />inside..<br />outside..<br />all around<br />but online<br />is no end<br />for some<br />who <br />otherwise<br />will be <br />separated <br />again..:)<br />Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-49659366745123735362015-08-21T12:23:32.767-04:002015-08-21T12:23:32.767-04:00Beautiful and haunting.Beautiful and haunting.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-47693850937928672042015-08-21T07:18:41.733-04:002015-08-21T07:18:41.733-04:00Halfway roads are less traveled,
the cold hangs in...Halfway roads are less traveled,<br />the cold hangs in the air,<br />even though the sun is shinning.<br /><br />One are dragged back in progress by half measures not rightly thought of. Very true in many instances Ayala!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-1007331094166579142015-08-21T06:52:06.546-04:002015-08-21T06:52:06.546-04:00Oh! this is done so beautifully.
And when a body ...Oh! this is done so beautifully. <br />And when a body lose its path,<br />the soul is hurt;<br />It flitters, jitters <br />and argue with its bearer,<br />when the final bell rings?<br />It weathers!!!Shamsud Ahmedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10402062675521045468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-89542591945577538152015-08-20T23:28:10.330-04:002015-08-20T23:28:10.330-04:00gnawing silence and even the sun can't give wa...gnawing silence and even the sun can't give warmth...yeah...it Is the end...great lines Ayala...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-16737844163316310212015-08-20T21:52:32.861-04:002015-08-20T21:52:32.861-04:00Silence gnaws like acid on metal... so true!Silence gnaws like acid on metal... so true!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-91434602476788918862015-08-20T21:23:03.943-04:002015-08-20T21:23:03.943-04:00This is how the (world) ends, not with a bang but ...This is how the (world) ends, not with a bang but a whimper.....this powerful poem brings that poem to mind. So many times, the end of a life or relationship is so painful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-72416412534113496062015-08-20T21:22:53.282-04:002015-08-20T21:22:53.282-04:00This is how the (world) ends, not with a bang but ...This is how the (world) ends, not with a bang but a whimper.....this powerful poem brings that poem to mind. So many times, the end of a life or relationship is so painful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-24611538215789064392015-08-20T20:56:40.727-04:002015-08-20T20:56:40.727-04:00This poem is sharp and tight. I certainly capture...This poem is sharp and tight. I certainly captures that feeling of the end, while life goes on for others.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-13317235523958676422015-08-20T18:54:37.925-04:002015-08-20T18:54:37.925-04:00The end pops up when it likes, no reason or rhyme ...The end pops up when it likes, no reason or rhyme to it most times.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-26395388681129044612015-08-20T18:24:39.751-04:002015-08-20T18:24:39.751-04:00Beautifully penned!Beautifully penned!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-52156788471450561522015-08-20T16:59:53.071-04:002015-08-20T16:59:53.071-04:00Indeed.. the end does not announce itself coming.....Indeed.. the end does not announce itself coming... powerful write.Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-66282713566000227052015-08-20T15:41:45.498-04:002015-08-20T15:41:45.498-04:00Ooh, this is so ominous and eerie, but also filled...Ooh, this is so ominous and eerie, but also filled with such truth. <br />I especially loved: " Smooth verses<br />are stored away like<br />ornaments after Christmas."<br /><br />Yes.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-73594543253231652015-08-20T14:01:29.151-04:002015-08-20T14:01:29.151-04:00I think you're right.I think you're right.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-62690051908557907372015-08-20T10:38:40.524-04:002015-08-20T10:38:40.524-04:00Oh the end.. something that is like a snake coiled...Oh the end.. something that is like a snake coiled up.. silently it slithers, and the green turning brown.. many ends are hard to consider.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-59654235659387183822015-08-20T08:12:36.005-04:002015-08-20T08:12:36.005-04:00That ending is painful ~ I specially like this pa...That ending is painful ~ I specially like this part:<br /><br />Silence gnaws like<br />acid on metal,Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-34426737871208144962015-08-19T19:50:52.795-04:002015-08-19T19:50:52.795-04:00Your poem echoes a number of endings, a person'...Your poem echoes a number of endings, a person's death or that of a relationship. It is always painful.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-45129160179268153202015-08-19T19:50:28.623-04:002015-08-19T19:50:28.623-04:00Ayala, consider posting this for Poets United Midw...Ayala, consider posting this for Poets United Midweek Motif, where the prompt is "Silence" this week. Your poem fits perfectly!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-56308187825731959642015-08-19T15:01:57.683-04:002015-08-19T15:01:57.683-04:00Stark reality that touches us all. When I worked h...Stark reality that touches us all. When I worked hospice, we sometimes asked patients to visualize how they would like it to be.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com