tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post1526234289354100027..comments2023-12-05T20:23:46.899-05:00Comments on a sun kissed life: A Corner In The Worldayalahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-87367280704868767872011-07-02T21:14:47.153-04:002011-07-02T21:14:47.153-04:00This is so beautiful, poignant, heartfelt. Love th...This is so beautiful, poignant, heartfelt. Love the bottomless purse line.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-90211157829044725742011-07-01T02:56:41.572-04:002011-07-01T02:56:41.572-04:00Life, evolution, freedom, journey- all woven toget...Life, evolution, freedom, journey- all woven together with so much beauty!<br />Undisputedly; one of the bests I have read..<br /><br />hugs xoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-64345180920620959112011-06-30T13:39:37.257-04:002011-06-30T13:39:37.257-04:00Wow, Ayala. This powerful poem is both evocative ...Wow, Ayala. This powerful poem is both evocative and mysterious. The image that most resonated with me was that of the fort and soldiers - both toys and symbols of protection.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-28674353294280834772011-06-29T21:45:39.126-04:002011-06-29T21:45:39.126-04:00Very gentle, but very vivid imagery of pain, prote...Very gentle, but very vivid imagery of pain, protection and, love. <br />Enjoyed this very much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-9086218853217520892011-06-29T21:28:55.994-04:002011-06-29T21:28:55.994-04:00A somberness to this piece, really composed perfec...A somberness to this piece, really composed perfectly ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-89204427338523987942011-06-29T19:11:39.489-04:002011-06-29T19:11:39.489-04:00Those secrets in the bottom of the purse - wonderf...Those secrets in the bottom of the purse - wonderful image, wonderful lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-42080523119097949312011-06-29T12:50:06.365-04:002011-06-29T12:50:06.365-04:00The mix of darkness and hope pulls on my heart. We...The mix of darkness and hope pulls on my heart. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-51145634769966041692011-06-29T12:20:34.997-04:002011-06-29T12:20:34.997-04:00Beautiful in depth of feeling and freedom found!Beautiful in depth of feeling and freedom found!Sean Vesseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05509793249114004395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-24850674822179483202011-06-29T12:03:46.338-04:002011-06-29T12:03:46.338-04:00Deep in feeling, yet anchored in physical space. E...Deep in feeling, yet anchored in physical space. Excellent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-82665466292343912882011-06-29T10:29:50.333-04:002011-06-29T10:29:50.333-04:00For years I held secrets,
in a bottomless purse th...For years I held secrets,<br />in a bottomless purse that I carried...<br /><br />Such great lines in a very touching poem.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-57426498999014045602011-06-29T08:28:39.993-04:002011-06-29T08:28:39.993-04:00I think you are really growing as a poet. This is...I think you are really growing as a poet. This is deep but not confusing, and so evocative to me. I adopted a little boy at three, from a horrible circumstance. This poem spoke right to my heart. <br /><br />The sparcity of words is absolutely perfect....this poem haunts in a beautiful way.<br /><br />Lady NyoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-85659214940649180892011-06-29T04:48:09.581-04:002011-06-29T04:48:09.581-04:00perfect, flawlwss, beautiful .... it's best to...perfect, flawlwss, beautiful .... it's best to open up the bag and let our pain, sorrows, memories to be free, to merge with the wide ... and we can do this with our loved ones.Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-38265935658461039892011-06-28T23:44:40.518-04:002011-06-28T23:44:40.518-04:00I wish I didn't so well understand this one.I wish I didn't so well understand this one.Randy Behaviorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17221025801740967490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-43930466466913233112011-06-28T23:41:52.752-04:002011-06-28T23:41:52.752-04:00This is one of your best, I think.This is one of your best, I think.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-71767806336673736132011-06-28T23:09:10.877-04:002011-06-28T23:09:10.877-04:00You drew me in with the first line...Wonderful Aya...You drew me in with the first line...Wonderful Ayala!Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-23950011002191949422011-06-28T21:42:05.447-04:002011-06-28T21:42:05.447-04:00"This was our corner of the world,
the nightm..."This was our corner of the world,<br />the nightmares would not seep through,<br />these walls.<br />I would not let them enter." I love your motherly instincts to protect your little one from the nightmares.<br /><br />Beautiful imagery.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-22861582058115565282011-06-28T19:26:14.175-04:002011-06-28T19:26:14.175-04:00Nice imagery Ayala. And I detect undertones of sad...Nice imagery Ayala. And I detect undertones of sadness and mystery. It's incredible the stories you can weave with these one shots. Bravo my friend.Rudri Bhatt Patel @ Being Rudrihttp://www.beingrudri.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-60581641128053517592011-06-28T19:20:05.207-04:002011-06-28T19:20:05.207-04:00This is so lovely, ayala, I was drawn in to your s...This is so lovely, ayala, I was drawn in to your story until the very end with the bubbles...wonderful ending to this piece!<br />p.s.-- that dog brings a smile to my face each time I come here! :)Annahttp://waysidewordgarden.wordpress.com/2011/06/28/a-battle/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-38383750457176943012011-06-28T19:03:35.393-04:002011-06-28T19:03:35.393-04:00Not an unneeded word, every one in its place for a...Not an unneeded word, every one in its place for a poem full of heart and life. I can believe that "the nightmares would not seep through these walls."hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-82178952100643071512011-06-28T19:00:36.491-04:002011-06-28T19:00:36.491-04:00To rise above with one you love... this is success...To rise above with one you love... this is success! Nicely parsed. <br /><br />http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/28/the-g-spotAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-63403203805513553602011-06-28T18:28:44.098-04:002011-06-28T18:28:44.098-04:00Lovely poem, and the ending is magical!Lovely poem, and the ending is magical!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-79378877293636218692011-06-28T18:06:48.446-04:002011-06-28T18:06:48.446-04:00What a beautiful story of children their life as t...What a beautiful story of children their life as they grow and the roof covers home<br /><br />Thanks for your one shot supportmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-44647516899558524042011-06-28T17:44:11.145-04:002011-06-28T17:44:11.145-04:00Beautiful imagery. I felt myself breathing at the ...Beautiful imagery. I felt myself breathing at the end with you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-59279506368908919272011-06-28T17:31:55.028-04:002011-06-28T17:31:55.028-04:00Poignant storytelling, Ayala. Good that you have ...Poignant storytelling, Ayala. Good that you have each other with whom to rise above.Belindahttp://thehalfwaypoint.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7077596651922595536.post-54588424395315823622011-06-28T17:15:31.596-04:002011-06-28T17:15:31.596-04:00Beautiful Ayala...I exhaled, quite naturally at th...Beautiful Ayala...I exhaled, quite naturally at the end of reading your poem...feeling the release and then fresh breath filling my lungs again.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.com