His fingers play with
my jingle-jangle bracelets.
Wood beads from India,
Chinese coins my friends and I wear,
an eye encased in gold to ward
off evil spirits,
Buddha with a turquoise bead
and a ladybug.
He touches them gently
feeling each one,
knowing them the way
he knows my lullabies.
The way he knows my voice,
when we dream about the moon and the stars.
When I move away he stretches
to find me in his sleep,
to find the curve of my waist,
where I held his father long ago.
I listen to his breath,
his presence fills my soul.
I dream big dreams for him.
I build memories,
they echo the laughter we share.
A landscape he can remember
and carry in his heart,
the way I carry him in my being.
Such a deep bond, Ayala....what a wonderful journey you will make together. Such joy! A tender love.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sherry. :)
DeletePerfect! And a well expressed heart full of love.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Thank you!
DeleteCalling my mom in 3...2...1...
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteCreating that bond will be forever lasting indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Pat.
DeleteA poem full of love on both sides.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Toni.
DeleteLucky you! This is so touching and so wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Audrey.
DeleteThis is priceless & filled with love. Isn't it wonderful to be a grandmother?
ReplyDeleteIt’s the best! Thank you, Mary.
DeleteThere is a deep connection here, may it always be so Ayala!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteSadly, these bonds don't always last. For you and your family, I hope you never know the pain of separation, as it cuts deep into one's soul. This, I talk from personal experience with my mom.
ReplyDeleteI am sorry.
DeleteThis should be called 'A Mum's Lullaby..or prayer'- beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSo that is what it is like, that is what the touching is for, and to touch and carry the voice like a bead, like a body, is a magnificent image, even better for ringing true!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Susan.
DeleteI was deeply touched by your write! You are very lucky. One never knows what the future will bring. Best to be present in this moment, and be aware of the magic.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Annell.
DeleteThis is beautifully poignant! Your love shines through 💖💖
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sanaa.
DeleteLovely musing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rudri.
Deleteknowing them the way
ReplyDeletehe knows my lullabies.
- beautifully written!
Thank you!
DeleteLuv the "building of memories"
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thank you!
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How very beautiful! I have not had grand-babies; you make me know this warm experience a little.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteAlways giving happiness: sweet babies
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteThis is so touching--gave me the chills.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Victoria.
DeleteWhat a wonderful moment... I hope your beads and charms weave a lovely spell for him to grow in.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI enjoyed the sounds in your poem, Ayala: the jingle-jangle bracelets, wooden beads and coins, I can imagine they keep the little guy entertained, and, of course, your lullabies and laughter. You've created a beautiful feeling of closeness and warmth.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kim.
DeleteWhat a wonderful picture of love you have painted. The words you used conveyed so much more than there mere dictionary definitions would warrant.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis is so sweet!
ReplyDeleteThanks ☺️
DeleteSome confusion for me as to the time, after he has grown or as a toddler, or both--the father from /long ago/ left me searching for more back story and connections. I lost my mother when she was 39. Your sweet maternal poetics hits my center heart.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Glenn. Sorry for your loss.
DeleteThis is about my 18 month grandson.
The aching love in this is almost physical. It's wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis is so good!!! I love sweetheart baby-moment poetry. :)
ReplyDeleteNice last lines about the landscape both of you can carry.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Frank.
Deletewhere I held his father long ago.
ReplyDeleteI listen to his breath,
his presence fills my soul.
I dream big dreams for him.
One would want great things for a grand-baby more than what one provided for a son!
Hank
Thank you, Hank.
DeleteOh, this is beautiful. The tactile sense of belonging is so well narrated in your words. Tender, sweet and heartwarming.
ReplyDelete-HA
Thank you!
DeleteBeautiful moment of intense awareness of the present that has somehow woven through it the past and the future as well...
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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ReplyDeleteSo beautiful, Ayala. I especially love your closing lines.
ReplyDeleteA beautifully rendered piece, filled with tender evocations.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful rendering of family closeness.
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWhat an incredibly beautiful poem of a mother's love.
ReplyDeleteThis is so VERY sweet, Ayala.
ReplyDeleteTender and lovingly emotional...beautiful write
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