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Tuesday, July 2, 2013

My Rant





A penny for your thoughts,
a dime for your poem,
what are we all searching for?
A pedestal to stand on,
a mention,
a comment,
or to leave a mark on this world?
To scatter our thoughts which
we claim to be true,
wisdom learned from
pain and living.
We all learned a lesson
or two,
perhaps several lessons.
We have been there at one time or another,
lied to,
cheated on,
betrayed,
abandoned.
We are all connected,
I feel your pain,
sharp on my skin.
This is not my war,
but I have fought other battles,
and if this gate is open
I will run towards you.
I will lift you 
with a kind word,
a smile that warms you,
I will scatter sunshine
 on your cloudy days.
I will let distress and bitterness
dissipate.
I want to save one soul,
one life,
one dream,
today.





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75 comments:

  1. AlitaJuly 2, 2013 at 12:08 PM

    It is all about real connections, right?! We are all desperate to connect. This resonates deeply, Ayala!

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:27 PM

      We are all connected...thank you, Alita.

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  2. AbhraJuly 2, 2013 at 12:15 PM

    "I will scatter sunshine
    on your cloudy days.
    I will let distress and bitterness
    dissipate."

    Wonderful. Loved it and could connect to your thoughts.

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  3. AdrienneJuly 2, 2013 at 12:28 PM

    This, my friend, is who you are. And all that I hope to be - someone who honestly, gently connects with one person at a time. No need for crowds, applause, recognition...nope. Just a hug or a kind word.

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  4. MaryJuly 2, 2013 at 1:16 PM

    Ayala, this is a wonderful philosophy. So many times when I read someone else's poem I find myself nodding, if not from my own personal experience at least from my empathy. I agree that a smile or a kind word is a gift of sunshine for the poet sometime. You live your philosophy. I know that.

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:29 PM

      Thank you, Mary. Generous of you to say.

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  5. ClaudiaJuly 2, 2013 at 2:02 PM

    i too think we can connect to others in difficult times because of the own difficult times we went through... we know how it feels and what the other needs most...yeah...scattering sunshine on cloudy days sounds like the thing to do...

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 8:43 PM

      We all have a battle we are fighting... Scattering the sunshine is good.

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  6. Jennifer WagnerJuly 2, 2013 at 2:20 PM

    Truly kind principles Ayala. Very sweet! We all need a kind word, a warm smile and sunshine to get us through some days!

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  7. Brian MillerJuly 2, 2013 at 2:31 PM

    nice...i want to save one soul...what higher calling could there be you know...we have all been there and that is the door of our connection, that though the circumstances may be different...we all have...scatter that sunshine...smiles.

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:31 PM

      You do scatter sunshine and kindness all the time :)

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  8. Bradley HowingtonJuly 2, 2013 at 2:40 PM

    You've saved many, Ayala. There are many more to be saved. Embrace them, sweetie. ♥

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:31 PM

      Thank you, dear Bradley. Your words so kind.

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  9. TKWJuly 2, 2013 at 2:50 PM

    I'm glad you choose to scatter your thoughts. I drink in every word.

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  10. Anand S UnniJuly 2, 2013 at 4:38 PM

    Amazing feeling you give with each word. Its such a great gift to be able to express yourself fully with very little words. Thats what you did here. I was left with goosebumps towards the end of your poem. Subliminal

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:32 PM

      I am touched that you feel this way, thank you so much.

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  11. TALONJuly 2, 2013 at 5:05 PM

    You've always lifted my spirits, ayala. This was gorgeous.

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:33 PM

      Thank you, dear friend. I appreciate it.

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  12. Rudri Bhatt Patel @ Being RudriJuly 2, 2013 at 5:39 PM

    Oh, Ayala. These words resonate. Keep scattering. There are so many of us who are ready to catch every single word.

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  13. ScarletJuly 2, 2013 at 6:24 PM

    What a beautiful message dear ~ One soul to lift, one soul to save, day by day ~

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  14. Pat HattJuly 2, 2013 at 6:27 PM

    take it one step indeed

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  15. TruedessaJuly 2, 2013 at 8:40 PM

    I believe we are all connected..keep scattering that sunshine..you are a ray of light..

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  16. Mark KerstetterJuly 2, 2013 at 8:55 PM

    Thank you.

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:35 PM

      Thank you, Mark. I am happy this lifted your spirits.

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  17. AnonymousJuly 2, 2013 at 9:04 PM

    Thank you, it is so vital for us to share ourselves. And a comment never hurts (unless it's hurtful, of course, and that's not what we are all about, is it?)

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  18. Cressida de NovaJuly 2, 2013 at 9:31 PM

    nice thought
    nice message
    nice person

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  19. AnonymousJuly 2, 2013 at 10:17 PM

    It's all about connections...and you, A, are all about love and connections...I always look forward to your writes...for they are all filled with love and hope. Thank you for being you and sharing...and you do save...don't stop! ~jackie~

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:36 PM

      I thank you, Jackie. I appreciate your thoughts here-always!

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  20. steveroniJuly 2, 2013 at 10:39 PM

    Yup, Ayala...I agree, that early on, most of us are searching for Something, a purpose, OUR purpose. The WHY of it all.

    Then, when I lived through chaos and came out alive--it was all the while God...pruning me, making me ready to serve. (But I did not KNOW that!)

    And here and now, it is time to DO Something--help another, spread the news of hope and power, to those who are hopeless and powerless. And if ONE today, hears that message, an is inspired to follow it, then my day has been OH, SO WORTHY!

    Thanks for reminding me of so much in your brief well-spelled thoughts.

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:37 PM

      Thank you, Steve. I know you are one that lives this philosophy. Peace and love to you always.

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  21. Dana DampierJuly 3, 2013 at 12:25 AM

    Exactly!!! Thank you Ayala for your support...

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  22. UnknownJuly 3, 2013 at 12:49 AM

    You scatter beautiful sunshine that warms all of us, thank you!

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  23. grapelingJuly 3, 2013 at 2:20 AM

    I admire this couplet, set in a strong write:

    and if this gate is open
    I will run towards you.

    ~ M

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  24. anthonynorthJuly 3, 2013 at 3:09 AM

    An excellent attitude to life.

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:38 PM

      Thank you, Tony. An attitude I learned by example from my dad. :)

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  25. Robert Gibson: PWES EditorJuly 3, 2013 at 5:14 AM

    I loved this write. Here's my dime...

    I also love to lift up and encourage... this fits me to a 'T'!

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  26. kaykualaJuly 3, 2013 at 5:48 AM

    It's a noble thing to do, spreading good tidings around. It makes one secure and sincere as a consequence! Great write ayala!

    Hank

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 7:39 PM

      Thank your, Hank. I appreciate your comment.

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  27. Todd Alan KraftJuly 3, 2013 at 7:24 AM

    "I will scatter sunshine on your rainy days," is a really nice line. Can I call you? ;) The flow is great. I love the message.

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 8:46 PM

      Thank you, Todd. Yes ;) on a cloudy day .

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  28. OutlawyerJuly 3, 2013 at 7:37 AM

    That's a tall order but your sincerity and sweetness carry it out . A wonderful aspiration . K. ( Manicddaily)

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  29. AnonymousJuly 3, 2013 at 9:07 AM

    Nice read, I can't speak for all but for me, I write because I must!

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  30. Myrna R.July 3, 2013 at 11:23 AM

    You reveal your heart in this one. Wish we could all save one life today. But, let's at least make our own full and kind. Really enjoyed this poem.

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 8:36 PM

      Thank you, I am happy you enjoyed it. I appreciate your thoughts on this.

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  31. flaubertJuly 3, 2013 at 12:21 PM

    You are such a kind heart, Ayala.

    Pamela

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 8:37 PM

      I feel embaressed and humbled, thanks Pamela.

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  32. VictoriaJuly 3, 2013 at 12:54 PM

    You ask some really wise questions in this, Ayala. Kavannah...what is our intention?

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    1. ayalaJuly 3, 2013 at 8:39 PM

      Thank you, Victoria. Kavannah ... Important .

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  33. brudbergJuly 3, 2013 at 3:02 PM

    I want to save one soul,
    one life,
    one dream,
    today.

    That a powerful and positive end.

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  34. WolfsrosebudJuly 4, 2013 at 8:18 AM

    written with the emotions of a true poet

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  35. AnonymousJuly 4, 2013 at 2:27 PM

    If only all rants were so thoughtful...

    :)

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  36. Beth WinterJuly 6, 2013 at 7:23 PM

    I smiled at the thought of the open gate and you running to me when I'm in need. You have such a heart.

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  37. Optimistic ExistentialistJuly 9, 2013 at 7:42 AM

    As rants go, this one is rather amazing and thought-provoking ;)

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