Sun Kissed Days
Tuesday, March 27, 2012
The One For Me
You live,
you love,
with passion in your veins.
A man with a boy's heart,
you delight in hermit crabs,
finding a school of bait.
You cast a net like a matador,
in a bullfight.
Your arms strong,
your lines flowing.
I love the fire in your eyes,
those eyes know me,
the way they know the tides.
Your hands know me,
the way they know a tug of a Marlin or a shark.
When the Marlin dances,
there is wonder in your eyes.
The way your eyes shine
when I wrap myself around you
and melt into you.
You live,
you love,
you create art and beauty
from the moments of our life.
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Wonderful Ayala! I hope you showed this to him.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mary. :)
Deleteawww...this is beautiful...love the intimacy in it...the knowing of the eyes and hands....and the feelings within them....def hope he got to read this...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brian. :)
DeleteWhich such a thing is found, wonderful indeed, very nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Pat :)
DeleteThis is vibrant, alive!! Just the way a full life and a true love are meant to feel!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Adrienne..it is meant to be this way... :)
Deletehe knows the tides and can catch the most exotic creatures in your ocean. so very nicely done:)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ed :)
Deletewonderful tribute... someone is loved
ReplyDeleteThank you...and yes he is :)
DeleteAwww... your love is so obvious. It's a wonderful thing to see. Prose is glowing. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bren :)
DeleteYour love fills every line--beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Audrey :)
DeleteI love your thoughts and your heart, Ayala!
ReplyDeleteSounds like you got an amazing catch!!
Sweet.
xoxo
He's a keeper :) Thank you, dear Jannie...
Deletexoxo
Loved this ayala--full of the heart's truth, and reminded me of Hemingway, for some reason--maybe the marlin. ;_)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Joy. I love Hemingway and I love the ocean and my fisherman..maybe that's why :)
DeleteJust lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you, KB :)
DeleteAw...this is so sweet and romantic...love it ~
ReplyDeleteThank you, Grace :)
DeleteBeautifully spun! A piece from the heart and so emotionally reaching,I enjoyed this a lot! xoxo
ReplyDeleteThank you, Poppy :) happy you enjoyed it!
DeleteThere are many happy women whose men love them--and love to fish! You have found one such...a 'keeper'. And I am sure he knows it. What FEELINGS you translate into words, just beautifully done, Ayala!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Steve...he is a keeper :) Peace.
DeleteAyala- This is so beautiful... a love song, really.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Laurie :)
Deleteso sweet and beautiful, that love shines through in these words.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kelly :)
DeleteClearly true love, thank you for sharing a piece of your gift with us, gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anna :)
Deletewhat beautiful and heartfelt intimacy...so much warmth and tenderness in this ayala..
ReplyDeleteThank you, Claudia. Hope you are having a blast in N.Y.C :)
DeleteThe comfort and beauty of those who know us and love us unlike any other...it's a beautiful thing. This is wonderful to read, Ayala.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Emma :)
DeleteBeautiful write, I love that he delights in hermit crabs...they're fabulous creatures. An intimate portrait of love.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Di. He has a love for all these creatures...so sweet!
DeleteWhat's obvious here is the love that emanates from every word. Nice Ayala!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rudri :)
Deletejust a beautiful sentiment and emotion carried in this...wonderful pen my friend! ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rose :)
DeleteO, how I love this poem! The tenderness, the intimacy...turns me into a melted chocolate pool Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jackie...how sweet :)
DeleteA beautiful poem, full of tenderness and love. I enjoyed this immensely.
ReplyDeleteThank you, James :)
DeleteI suddenly want to go fishing! I really like this image: "You cast a net like a matador, in a bullfight." Perfect.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kristen :) Go fishing...you will love it!
DeleteThis is really lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mama Zen :)
DeleteWow, Ayala, this piece is very sensuous!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Caroline :)
DeleteAyala,
ReplyDeleteVery direct and intimate. Nicely done.
Thank you, Steve. I appreciate it. :)
DeleteCool articel
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sucen :)
DeleteWonderful, ayala! It takes strong arms to land a marlin.So also strong feelings of deep love! Great write!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank you, Hank...love those arms :)
DeleteLove is never fishy...ouch
ReplyDeleteLove is good :)
DeleteBeautiful and full of love! Lovely write Ayala! ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bradley <3
Deletewhat a love poem! the last lines sum it up perfectly - you create art and beauty
ReplyDeletefrom the moments of our life
Thank you, Sheila. :)
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem to your love. I especially like these lines:
ReplyDelete"You cast a net like a matador,
in a bullfight."
Nice simile! (And thanks for your encouraging words on my dolphin poem - I wasn't quite happy with it and changed a few things after you read it. Now I like it better :)
Thank you, Leslie. I loved your poem :)
DeleteYou always make me cry Ayala :) This is beautiful, you own the dream.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Oceangirl :) You are sweet.
Deletei agree with oceangirl... this is so sweet it made me tear up. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Joanna :)
Deletei've never seen a Marlin dance
ReplyDeleteHa :)
DeleteGood ink, Ayala. How about a stanza break or two? (just a suggestion :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Luke :)
DeleteLove the intimacy in this. And what man wouldn't want to be compared to a matador!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Belinda :) He is that and more :)
DeleteBeautiful! Strong, virulent, powerful. Love the pictures these words evoke!
ReplyDeletejust thought i'd stop by and wish you a nice sunday...i'm back home again...was a wonderful time...
ReplyDeleteSuch a great piece...you've really managed to capture just about everything that's important in a man!
ReplyDeleteI hope you are having a fantastic weekend so far!
always a great start to my day. A very manly man described here.
ReplyDeleteThose last two lines, ayala, just sum up what makes for a beautiful life. Just gorgeous!
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